Overall, despite its many many questionable (to say the list) points, the truth is that I binge read it, enjoyed it, and actually still remember it very well a couple months later, which is almost unprecedented for me. I thought its approach to the whole magic world and to magic itself was interesting, and very original. I also found it very interesting to read. Harry never did care about any player other than himself. Fifty years before Robert Baratheon was to ascend the Iron Throne, Westeros receives one hell of a bad musician. And even though I didn't like the views it expressed I thought that they fit well with the world and characters the author was portraying. It only takes a single disharmonious element to throw off the entire composition. Even though I'm not much for dark-Harry fics, I couldn't put it down. ![]() On the other hand, however, I found that, for a fic, it was extremely well written, and the plot and characters were well thought out and developed. I quite disagree with a lot of the opinions it expresses and found it racist and insulting. On the one hand I find myself hard-pressed to support and promote it because it had many things I did not like and many things that made me wanna punch someone. I actually had to take a while before deciding. I find it hard to rate and review this fic. 3 star (fanfiction) rating not including the vitriol spewed. I suppose I’ll just consider him a less talented, otaku version of Orson Scott Card. ![]() It’s a long somewhat good story written by a shitty person who randomly self-inserts. Fortunately these jarring tirades (and the smut I suppose) don’t appear until the story has taken off and because they are so irrelevant, they can be skimmed over if you have thick enough skin and interest in the story. Youve got pretty good mental focus for your age.' Hermione launched herself at him with a shriek of rage. 'Of course, Hogwarts herself helped you out a bit, but not bad for a newbie. His attempt to integrate regurgitated hate group propaganda with his cynical protagonist growing up in an isolated magical world fails to come off as naturally as he intended. Harry commented, floating down to the ground and casually executing the still living troll with a thin beam of fire right to its head. The troubles of the upper years, the poor quality of the school brooms, the Quidditch cup, the latest shenanigans of the Weasley twins and so forth. Two had already died in the battle last month and one was a newbie. It was the first of several routine meetings between the Hogwarts professors and several things had already been discussed. literal rants this would be a more palatable story. It took only a couple of minutes to gather the Raven Host, but it felt like a small eternity as was usually the case when you were in a hurry. If the author could hire an editor to remove all of his sexist, racist, and etc. All that is written above is still valid, plus the author is prejudice against basically everything and anyone other than the average white male. Honestly I’m hoping he stole some of his cool ideas from a better fic so I can find and read that one.Īpparently he didn’t steal his cool ideas from a different fanfic, or at least I couldn’t find one that had similar content. I don’t know where the plot went, or if it’s ever coming back, but I’ve spent too many chapters waiting for it to show up again. Unfortunately it got bogged down by chapters filled with meaningless sex and harem building.
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